基础写作分类指导
(一)句子成分综合训练
TeachingAims:Toreviewthegrammar"membersofsentences"
Teachingaids:Multi-mediateaching
Teachingprocedures:
一、Lead-in.Correctthesentences.
1.Useputerscanimprovethequalityofeducation.
2.Nowpeoplerealizeprotectenvironmentandreduceresourcesareimportant.
3.Truefriendsaresharehappyandsorrowwithyou.
4.Abacusistheoldestputerhasbeenusedforalongtimeinchina.
5.Wewilleasytoknowwhattheteacherssaid.
二、Analyzetheunitsoflanguage.
英语有词,词组,句三个层次的语言单位.构成词组的元件是词,英语的词类如下:
名词(n)John,room,water,belief
主动词(mainv)say,e,get,give,search
形容词(adj)sad,happy,big,all,old,new
副词(adv)slowly,very,then,late,fast
助动词(auxv)do,can,may,will,would
词类限定词(determiner)the,a(n),this,that,every,such
代词(pron)you,he,they,anybody,one,which
数词(num)one,two,three,first,second,third介词(preposition)of,at,in,with,except,inspiteof
连词(conjunction)and,but,when,that,although,sothat,either等or等感叹词(interjection)oh,ah,ugh,phew,构成句子的元件是词组,它担任各种句子成分.英语的词组主要有:
名词词组:agasstove,anintelligencetest,theoldandthesick
(由一个名词或代词构成,也可由包括限定词在内的各种修饰语加名词构成.在句中可担任主语,宾语和表语,名词修饰语和状语)
动词词组:以动词为中心的词组谓语动词
非谓语动词形容词词组:themostexpensive(以形容词为中心构成的词组,它在句中主要担任定语或表语)
副词词组:veryfluently,howwell,副词词组是以副词为中心构成的词组,它在句中主要担任状语
介词词组:atBeijingUniversity,highupinthesky,frombehindthedoor
(介词词组是以介词为中心词加宾语的词组,它在句中主要担任定语或状语),句子成分
一般的句子都有主语和谓语两个部分.谓语动词的性质决定着谓语的不同结构,即决定着谓语动词是否带宾语,表语或状语.即决定简单句的基本句型:SVSVCSVOSVoOSVOC
六、基本句型的扩大.
我们发现礼堂坐满了.
Wefoundthegreathallfullofstudentsandteachers.
我们发现大礼堂坐满了学生和教师.
Wefoundthegreathallfullofstudentsandteacherslisteningtoanimportantreport.
我们发现大礼堂坐满了学生和教师,在听一个重要报告.
WefoundthegreathallfullofstudentsandteacherslisteningtoanimportantreportmadebyaradefromthePeople'sDailyoncurrentaffairsinEastEurope.
我们发现大礼堂坐满了学生和教师,在听人民日报的一位同志作有关东欧局势的重要报告.
七、Analyzethefunctionsofdifferentphrases.
1.WeallstudyEnglishveryhard.
2.Whathesaidmademethinkalot.
3.Weseldomstaylateatnight.
4.Thereasonwhyhewaslatewasthattheplanewasdelayed.
八,判断横线上应填的结构(成分)
1,Thesepeoplearewillingtoriskbeingkilledbyfloods.
2.Sheatetwowhitesausagesandtwolittlerollsoffreshbreadateleveno'clockinthemorning,andshedranksomebeeroutofaglasslikeaflowervase.Hergrandfathersaidthebeerwasn'tatalllikeEnglishbeer,itwouldnotmakeherdrunk.Andthenshetookacab,andshesaw,itseemedtoher,thousandsandthousandsofwonderfulpicturesinaboutaquarterofanhour!
3.ItalkedtoTomaboutyourproblem.
4.Kevinhasbeenstudyingforthreehours.
5.Hiseyesareredandwatery.
九,在横线上填上恰当的词.
1,TheHighbridgeFolkFestivalinviteusicianromallovertheworldtoplaytheirmusicatoutdoorconcertsnearLakeBlendall.Youcaneventakeclassestheretheweekbeforethefestival.Youcanbringyourfamilyandtherearesomediscounttickets.Thereshouldbelotsofgoodfoodtoo.
2,"Stormchasing(追逐)"________(bee)anincreasinglypopularhobby,especiallyintheMidwestoftheUnitedStates,wheretherearefrequentstorm_______MarchandJuly.Astormchaserbeginstheday_____checkingtheInterforthe_______(late)weatherreports.
十,写作
以下是张各庄学生的简介:
张各庄远离其他村庄.过去,儿童上学困难.1988年成立了本村小学.
现状:
教师:3人
学生:48人
班级:5个
科目:6门---语文,数学,自然,音乐,美术和体育.
学费:免费写作内容:
张各庄小学将要接待一批英国的朋友,请你根据以上的信息,写一篇英文的介绍.标题是ZhangGeZhuangPrimarySchool
(二)关注句子结构
Examples:
1.Theredflowersareverybeautiful.
2.Heworkedhardinthefactorylastyear.
3.TheystudyEnglishcarefully.
4.Shegemeabookonscience.
5.Wemustkeeptheclassroomcleaneveryday.
并列句句子and句子:(要求:人人争取)
(and,but,or,however,whileyet,otherwise,notonly等butalso,either等or)
Heiygoodfriendandheishonest.
Hetriedhisbest,buthefailed
Hemadeapromise,however,hedidn'tkeepit
Eithereinorgoout.
复合句:含名词性从句/定语从句/状语从句的句子(要求:力争可用)
1.Whathewantsisabook.主语从句
2.Ithinkthatyouareright.宾语从句
3.Thisiswhyweputoffthemeeting.表语从句
4.Thenewsthattheywonthematchistrue.同位语从句
5.Hehasadaughterwhoworksinahospital.定语从句
6.Iwilltellhimwhenheesback.状语从句
7Ifyouheanyquestions,Icanhelpyou.状语从句
Therebe句子结构
.Therebe+S+todo/V-ing/V-ed/who/which从句(定语)
Therearemanystudentsstudyinginourschool.
等于Therearemanystudentswhoarestudyinginourschool.
Therearemanytreesleftinthehill.
等于Therearemanytreeswhichareleftinthehill.
Thereisstillmuchworktodothisevening.
等于Thereiuchworkworkwhichwewilldothisevening.
聚焦谓语动词和动词短语
1.实意/行为动词(时态和语态,主谓一致)
Helikeusic.
DadbougeabikelastSunday.
Manypeoplewerekilledintheearthquake.
2.情态动词+原形
can/may/must/need/shall/will+do等
Canyoufinishtheworktonight
Shemustbewaitingforyouforalongtime.
Youmaytakeanythingyoulike.
Thenewtermwillbeginsoon.
3.系表结构
1)be+形/副/介短/分词/不定式/从句
Maryiscareful.
Sheisastudent.
Weareintheclassroom.
Thenewsissurprising.
Hiswishistogotocollege.
Sheisnolongerwhatsheusedtobe.
2)look/sound/ell/taste/feel+adj.等起来
Theylookveryhappy.
Theanswersoundsreasonable.
Thefoodtastesdelicious.
3)bee/grow/turn+adj./n.等变
Ourschoolbeeuchbetter.
Hegrowsverytall.
Sheturneddoctorattheageof18.
用好关联词
在写作的过程中,关联词的应用非常关键.为了使文章结构严密,增强说服力和感染力,考生应该在句与句之间恰当地使用一些过渡性关联词语.常见的有:
1.表列举:forexample,forinstance,thatistosay,etc
2.表补充:besides,inaddition,moreover,what'ore,etc
3.表对比:ontheonehand等ontheotherhand,inspiteof,while,etc
4.表原因:becauseof,thanksto,dueto,owingto,etc
5.表结果:therefore,thus,asaresult,so,etc
6.表结论:toconclude,inaword,inbrief,tosumup,etc
7.表转折:however,nevertheless,yet,etc
句式多种表达方式:
1.运用同义词.
他上星期生病了.
Hegotilllastweek.等于Hewasilllastweek.等于Hefellilllastweek.
等于Hebecameilllastweek.等于Hewasinbadhealthlastweek.
等于Hewasnotfeelingwelllastweek.
2.运用同一词语的不同句式结构.或者同义短语.
他写那篇文章花了三个星期.
Ittookhimthreeweekstofinishthearticle.
Thearticletookhimthreeweeks.
Ittookthreeweekorhimtowritethearticle.
Towritethearticletookhimthreeweeks.
Writingthearticletookhimthreeweeks.
Hespentthreeweekinishingthearticle.
Hespentthreeweeksonthearticle.
3.运用简单句与复合句的互换.
Themanstandingthereisapoliceman.等于Themanwhoisstandingthereisapoliceman.
Whatweshoulddonextisunknown等于Whattodonextisunknown.
Wearethinkingofhowweshouldfinishtheworkintime.Wearethinkingofhowtofinishtheworkintime.
4.运用不同的句式结构.
他做完练习后,便出去了.
Afterhehadfinishedtheexercises,hewentout.(状语从句)
Hingfinishedtheexercises,hewentout.(分词短语)
Afterfinishingtheexercises,hewentout.
Theexerciseinished,hewentout.
Theexerciseshingbeendone,hewentout.(独立结构)
5.他是昨天下午到的.
Hecamehereyesterdayafternoon.
Hedidn'tehereuntilyesterdayafternoon.
Notuntilyesterdayafternoondidheehere.(倒装句)
背诵与学生生活有关的短语
学校生活及学习成绩begettingonwellwithone'sstudy
takeseveralcoursesatschool
heEnglish(Chinese,Physics等)every(other)day,workhardat等
putone'sheartinto等
beinterestedin等
befondof,likechemistrybest,begoodat等,bepoorat等,dowellin等,beweakin等makeprogressin等,failintheexam,betiredof等'passtheexamination,majorinhistory主修历史getadoctor'sdegree获得博士学位learnabout,succeedin等,beactiveinclass(work),takeanactivepartin积极参加learn等byheart背诵teachhimself自学workouta(maths)problem,improvehimselfinmaths
get90markor(English),getan"A"intheexam,heagoodmandof等掌握Hehasthebestrecordinschool.他的成绩最棒.
师生关系
getonwellwithsb,liketobewithstudents,begentlewithus,bekindtosb,beastrictteacher,bestrictwiththestudents,bestrictinwork,considersbtobe(as),thinkofhim(her)as认为---是helpsbwithsth,helpsbdo,
praisesbforsth等,blamesbforsth..
giveadviceon等,questionsbon等
besatiiedwith等
correctthestudents'homeworkcarefully,prepareforlessons,givesbalotofwork,
trytoteachsbgoodstudyhabits,
makeone'slessonslivelyandinteresting,teachsb.sth.,teachsbtodosth.
devoteallhistimetohiswork/teachingstudents,admire(sb.for)hisdevotiontothecauseofeducation
(三)课余活动及周末生活
spendone'stimeinmanydifferentways,enjoydoingthingsbyoneself,goswimming,heaswim,heanoutingat(theseashore),visittheplacesofinterest,seethesightsofBeijing,playthepiano(violin),playchess(basketball),hedancesonweekends,goforanouting,heapiicovertheweekend,
gotothecinema,heaparty,holdasporteeting,dosomereading,helpsbdosth,enjoyafamilytrip,geteverythingreadyfor,
rideone'sbikewithsb.to(thepark),
Therearealotofactivitiesat(thebeach).
Weenjoyachangefromourbusylifeinthecity.
Shewouldliketobringsth.tothepiic.
ItwaseryrelaxingSunday.
TherearegoodprogrammesonTVonweekends.
写作指导练习
学生习作一:单句改错
1.Igladtoseethem.Ithoughtitmustinteresting.
Intheholidays,Iwainishedmyhomework..
Moreandmorepeoplelikeplaybasketball.
SometimesIreadingbooksathome.
Itmakeyoudon'tgiveitup.
Everyoneverylikemusic.
playbasketballisinteresting.
Hewonthematchmadeushappy.
Therehelotsoflakes.
Atpresent,thereweremoreandmorepeopleoke.
Therearemanypeoplewererescuedfromunderrubblesandmud.
学生习作二:语篇改错,并优化语篇(并列句,复合句,衔接,连接词的使用)
YuanLongpingisoneofthemostfamousscientist.Heisthepioneerofsuperhybridrice.Hebornintoapoorfarmer'amily,hewasgraduatedfromtheSouthwestAgriculturalcollege.HungerwasadisturbingprobleminChina,Hehadalifegoal.Hewantedtoincreasericeharvest.Heworkedinthefieldanddevotedallhislifetodoresearchintoagriculture.Atlast,Hecameouthisdream.
YuanLongpingisahardworking,determinedandgenerousscientist.Hedoesn'tcareaboutmoney,fortablelifeandfamous.Heisquitesatiiedwithhislife.Helikeslisteningtoviolinmusic,swimmingandread.
Weshouldproudofhimandstudyhim.
学生习作三
ItisreportthatapowerfulearthquakehitWenchuanonMay12th,2016.About6718eopleweredied.20790peopleweremissed.361822peoplewereinjured.Atotalof15.61millionhousesweredestroyed.3.31millionbuildingelldown.Afterthedisaster,peoplealloverthecountryandtheworldwereshowedloveinthemandhelpedthem.Therearemanypeoplewererescuedinashorttime.Muchmoneyandmanyotherthingsdonatedtothem.Chinabeganathree-daynationalmourningforthetensofthousandsofpeoplefromMay19.Wehopetheywillrebuildtheirhomessoon.
写作指导练习答案
学生习作一:单句改错
1.Iamgladtoseethem.Ithoughtitmustbeinteresting.S+be+Pre
Intheholidays,Ifinishedmyhomework..S+Vt+O
Moreandmorepeoplelikeplayingbasketball.S+Vt+O
SometimesIreadbooksathome.S+Vt+O
Itmakesyounotgiveitup.S+Vt+O+Oc
EveryonelikeusicverymuchS+Vt+O
Playingbasketballisinteresting.S+be+Pre
Thathewonthematchmadeushappy.S+Vt+O+Oc
9.Therearelotsoflakes.Therebe句子结构
10Atpresent,thereweremoreandmorepeoplewhooke/oking.
11Therearemanypeople(whoare)rescuedfromunderrubblesandmud.
优化改写1:1YuanLongpingisoneofthemostfamousscientistswhoisthepioneerofsuperhybridrice.2(Thoughhewas)bornintoapoorfarmer'amily,hegraduatedfromtheSouthwestAgriculturalcollege.3Then,HungerwasadisturbingprobleminChina,sohehadalifegoalthathewantedtoincreasericeharvest.4Heworkedinthefieldanddevotedallhislifetodoingresearchintoagriculture.5Atlast,hisdreamcameout
6YuanLongpingisahardworkinganddeterminedandgenerousscientistwhodoesn'tcareaboutmoney,fortablelifeandbeingfamous/fame.7Heisquitesatiiedwithhislifeandhelikeslisteningtoviolinmusic,swimmingandreading.
8Weshouldbeproudofhimandlearnfromhim.
优化改写2ItisreportedthatapowerfulearthquakehitWenchuanonMay12th,2016.About6718eoplewerekilled,20790peopleweremissingand361822peoplewereinjured.Atotalof15.61millionhousesweredestroyedand3.31millionbuildingelldown.Afterthedisaster,peoplealloverthecountryandtheworldshowedloveinthemandhelpedthem.Therearemanypeople(whowere)rescuedinashorttime.Muchmoneyandmanyotherthingsweredonatedtothem.Besides,Chinabeganathree-daynationalmourningforthetensofthousandsofpeoplefromMay19.
Wehopetheywillrebuildtheirhomessoon.
优秀范文:ItwasonMay12th,2016,whenapowperfulearthquake,whichstrucktheareasaroundSichuancausedseriousdamage.Theearthquakemeasuring8degreereleasedalargeamountofenergy.Theearthshakedviolentlyandmanybuildingelldown.Citesintheseareaswerecoveredbyrubblesandmud.anditisestimatedthatthousandsofpeoplewerekilledandhurt/injured.Manypeopleweremissingandhomeless.
Afterthedisaster,theChinesegovernmenttookactionstorescuepeopleindanger.Peoplealloverthecountryunitedtogether.wedonatedmoneyandshowedloveinthem.Wedoeverythingwecantohelpthem.
Earthquakeisahorriblethingwhichistous,weshoulddoeverythingthatwecantokeepthemaway.MoreadvancedwarningsystemsshouldbesetupWeshouldlearnsomeknowledgetoprotectourselves.What'ore,,weshouldprotecttheearthinsteadofdestroyingthem.
(三)经典句型
1.Accordingto等
2.AarasI'mconcerned/等
3.Asisknowntousall,等
4.Aslongas等
5.Wouldyouminddoing等
6.Wouldyoumindif等
7.Foronething,等Foranother,等
8.Hardly等when等
9.Howareyougettingon/alongwith等
10.Idoubtthat/if/whether...
11.Ifindithardformeto...
12.Iinsistthat...
13.Iinsiston(doing)...
14.Iprefer...to...
15.Ipreferto...ratherthan...
16.I'mdeterminedto...
17.Itwasn'tuntilthat...
(三)基础写作专题分类——如何写人物介绍(一)
例文1:检测如你叫李明,你的美国朋友布鲁斯开始学习中国文学,来信询问鲁迅其人及作品.你回信介绍鲁迅,内容如下
(1)鲁迅,原名周树人,浙江绍兴人
(2)为了国家,弃医从文.
(3)着名的作家,思想家,而且还是中国现代文学的开创者.
(4)小说被译成多种文字,并被制成电影,如《阿Q正传》,《祝福》这两部影片.
(5)一些作品还被选入了中学和大学课本.
参考词汇:《阿Q正传》:TheTrueStoryofAHQ
《祝福》:TheNewYear'sSacrifice
[写作要求]只能使用5个句子表达全部内容.文章首尾已给出,不算字数.
[评分标准]句子结构的准确性,信息内容的完整性.
DearBruce,
IwasgladtoknowyoubegantostudyChineseliterature.NowletmetellyousomethingaboutLuxun._______________
SinceyouarelearningChineseliteratures,IthinkreadingLuXun'snovelswillhelpyoutoknowmoreaboutit.
Yours,
LiMing
例文2:
请你写一篇题为"我们的班长"的短文.简况如下:
她叫李敏,个子高,身体好,很活泼.她各科成绩都好,喜欢体育活动,又
能歌善舞.
2.她刚进校时,在英语学习上遇到不少困难.但她不怕苦,不怕难,努力把英语学好.
3.她严于律己,乐于助人,是大家学习的好榜样.
OurMonitor
PartA如何审题
文体
主体时态
人称
信息点整合
列提纲(不用写草稿)
PartB人物介绍的一般步骤
概况
Hewasbornin1971.
Sheiseightyearsold.
Sheisaneight-year-oldgirl.
Tom,aged18,isastudent.
MyChineseteacherisamiddle-agedwoman.
Bornin1971,hewasagoodstudentinschool.(使用分词短语)
ZhongNanshan,oneofthegreatestdoctorsinChina,wasborninGuangzhouin1941.(同位语结构)
2.外貌或性格
LiMing,atall,healthyandlivelygirl,isourmonitor.
Sheiskindtousbutratherstrictwithus.
Heisahandsomemanwithtwobigeyes.(用with结构做定语)
3.教育经历
Mymajorisbusinesanagement.
IhebeenlearningEnglishfor8years.
Iheputerexperience.
MajoredinScience,hegraduatedfromafamousUniversityinthenorth.
GraduatedfromthedepartmentofEnglishofZhongshanUniversity,shewentonfurthereducationandreceivedadoctor'sdegree.(使用非谓语)
4.生平
Notonlyisheinterestedinscience,butalsohehasagiftformusic.(使用倒装)
Hesetanewworldrecordofswimming,whichwonagoldmedalforChinaTeam.(非限制性定语从句)
评估(注意使用一些动词,形容词短语)
Leifengsetusagoodexample,soallthepeoplespokehighlyofhimandallrespectedhim.
HeisoneofthegreatestnovelistsinChinaandwillbealwaysrememberedasanoutstandingman.
LishizhenmakesgreatcontributionstoMedicalliterature.
PartC检查
主谓一致
动词时态与语态
名词单复数
单词评写
PartD范文1
BorninShaoxing,ZhejiangProvince,LuXunwithrealnameZhouShurenabandonedthestudyofmedicinebecausehethoughthecouldchangesocietymorethroughwriting.NotonlywasLuXunawell-KnownChinesewriter,athinker,andtranslator,butalsothefatherofmodernChineseliterature.Hisnovelshebeentranslatedintomanylanguagesandsomeofthenovelshebeenmadeintofilms,suchasTheTrueStoryofAHQandTheNewYear'sSacrifice.Someofhisnovelshebeencollectedinhighschoolandcollegetextbooks.
范文2
LiMing,atall,healthyandlivelygirl,isourmonitor,whonotonlydoeswellinallsubjectsbutalsoiondofsportsandgoodatsinginganddancing.LiMingworkshardatEnglish,andshewasactiveinclassanddidalotofpracticeafterclass.Atthebeginningwhenshecametotheschool,shehadquitealotofdifficultieswiththelanguage,butshewasnotafraidofthemandalwaystriedhardtooverethem.WithgreateffortsshemademuchprogressinEnglishstudy.Inaddition,LiMingiodestandalwaysreadytohelpothers,whilesheisverystrictwithherselfinherworkanddailylife,andshesetsusallafineexample.
PartE仿写
检测如你叫白云,从广告上得知广州某公司需要工程师.写信应聘.要求内容包含如下要点.
(1)姓名:白云,出生于广州市越秀区,年龄27岁.
(2)2001年毕业于中山大学,后来留学英国伦敦大学.
(3)2005年数学方面成果显着,获博士学位.
(4)英国一家公司想用高薪聘用他,但拒绝了.
(5)为了报效祖国,于2006年毅然回国.
(6)有数学天赋.
注意:
1)介绍必须包括所有内容要点,但不要逐条译成英语.文章首尾已经给出,不算字数.
[写作要求]只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容.
DearSir,
HowdoyoudoThroughthead.Iknowyourpanyneedsanengineer.Iwouldliketohethisjob.Nowletmeintroducemyselftoyou.
.
Iwillappreciateitverymuchifyouwouldgivemetheopportunity.Thankyouforyourconsideration.
Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.
Sincerelyyours,
Baiyun
如何写人物介绍(二)
1.出生was/werebornon等in等,
2.成长经历
(1)whenhewasaallboy,(2)asachild,
(3)duringhis(her)childhood,(4)aboyof15
(5)attheageof15(6)Whenatcollege
3.学业
(1)graduatefrom等,2)hemajoredin等,
(3)receiveadoctor'sdegree.(4)gethighereducation
(5)goabroadforfurtherstudies(6)hestudiedscience等
4.兴趣,工作
(1)beinterestedin,begoodat,befondof,heagiftfor
(2)workhardat,devote等to,winaprize,besuccesulin,makeachievements,makecontributions,befamousas/for,
写作训练
1.刘铭,1968年出生在福建省北部的一个山城.毕业于北京大学物理系.在大学期间,他各科成绩优秀,尤其是计算机和英语.他写的论文曾在全国获奖.业余时间他喜欢踢足球.2.汤姆出生在纽约.他家人口很多.他每天乘校车去上学.放学后他喜欢打篮球.他希望将来能到中国访问.3.林老师是我的化学老师.他五十多岁了.他在课上总是鼓励我们提问题.他的课是如此生动,以至我们都爱学化学.虽然他对我们要求很严格,但我们都很喜欢他.李立被认为是我们班最好的学生之一.她总是乐于帮助别人.她不但学习好,小提琴拉得也很好.她的两篇作文已经在报纸上发表.她为我们树立了学习的好榜样.32枚金牌,其中刘翔的110米跨栏更是令世界为之关注.请你根据下面图表写一篇文章,简要介绍他的情况.
姓名刘翔性别男出生日期1983.7.13出生地上海体重74公斤身高1.88米个人爱好唱歌,电脑基
本
情
况1.1999年3月入选上海市田径队,2000年8月入选国家青年队,教练是孙海平
2.2002年,获亚运会及亚锦赛冠军
3.2003年,在英国世界室内田径锦标赛中获60米跨栏第三
4.2004年8月27日获雅典奥运会冠军,成绩是12"91,平世界纪录,打破奥运会纪录参考词汇:跨栏hurdle亚锦赛AsianChampionships
Weallsincerelyhopethathewillgetbetterinthe2016OlympicGamesinBeijing.
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Possibleversion:
1.LiuMin,whowasborninaalltowninthenorthofFujianProvince,
graduatedfromtheDepartmentofPhysicsofBeijingUniversity.Whenhewas
intheuniversity,hedidverywellinallthesubjects,especiallyinEnglish
andputer.Heevenwonthenationalprizebecauseofhisessay.Inhis
sparetimehelikedtoplayfootball.
2.TomwasborninNewYork.Therearemanypeopleinhiamily.(His
familyisabigone.)Everyday,hegoestoschoolbybike.(Heridesto
schooleveryday.)Hishobbyisplayingbasketballinhissparetime.Hehopes
toheachancetogotovisitChinaoneday.
3.MrLiniychemistryteacher.Heisinhiiftiesnow.Healways
encouragesustoraisequestionsinhisclass.Hislessonsaresolivelythatallofusliketostudychemistry.Heisverystrictwithus,butweall
respectandlovehim.
4.Liliisregardedasoneofthebeststudentsinourclass.Sheisalways
readytohelpothers.Sheisnotonlygoodatherstudies,butalsosheplays
theviolinverywell.Twoofherpositionshebeenpublishedinthenewspaper.Shesetsagoodexampletousall.
5LiuXiang,aShanghainative,wasbornonJuly13,1983.Hisheightis188cm,weight74kg.Singingandtheputerarehishobbies.InMarch,1999,heenteredtheShanghaitrackandfieldteamandoneyearlater,hewasadmittedtotheNationalYouthTeam.SunHaipinghasbeentraininghim.In2002,hewonthegoldmodalsinthemen's110mhurdlesattheAsianGamesandtheAsianChampionships.Thenextyear,hetookthirdinthe60mhurdlesattheWorldIndoorChampionshipsinEngland.AttheAthensOlympicGamesonAugust27,2004.Liuwonthemen's110mhurdleinalin12.91seconds,equalingtheworldrecordsetandbreakingtheOlympicrecord.
如何写人物介绍(三)练习
1.1996年普通高等学校招生全国英语统一考试书面表达试题
检测设你是李华,申请到一家外资企业工作.对方要求你用英语写一篇短文,介绍自己的基本情况.短文应包括下表所列全部内容.
姓名:李华出生年月:1977年2月出生地:辽宁大连学历1984-1990光明小学1990-1996大连市第六中学所学主要课程语文,数学,英语,物理,化学,电脑特长英语,电脑(去年在全校电脑竞赛中获第一名)业余爱好游泳,滑冰,集邮,流行音乐注意:1.情况介绍必须采用短文形式,2.词数100个左右.情景作文国际文化交流中心将组织一次由各国学生参加的"和平,友谊"夏令营活动,要求报名者提交英文个人简历.检测设你是王姗,请根据下列信息写一篇个人简历.
注意:1,词数不少于60.2,可根据内容要点适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
检测定你是李华,亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办,现在正在招募志愿者,你希望成为其中一员.请按要求用英文给组委会写一封申请信.内容应包括:
个人情况:年龄,性别,学历
个人条件:英语好,爱好体育,善于交往,乐于助人,熟悉本地情况
承诺:提供最佳怎么写作
注意:
词数100左右,开头语已为你写好
可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
生词:申请–apply(v.),application(n.),志愿者–volunteer
请根据下面的英文短诗,展开适当的想象,写一篇短文.标题为:MyTeacherMrMoore
There'sateacherMr.Moore.
Whoislovelyandthrty-four.
Alwaysencouragingustotry.
Heleadsustoaworldof"why".
Wealladmirehimmoreandmore.
注意:1.不得照抄短诗原文.2.必须结合短诗的内容,发挥想象,适当展开.
3.必须突出短诗的主题,结构完整,语意连贯.
4.短文不能写成诗歌形式.5.词数:120左右.
姓名李刚性别男出生年月1982.9籍贯山东现就读学校北京外国语大学英语系职务团支部书记兴趣,爱好,特长体育运动,唱歌,跳舞,口语流利志向当一名好翻译学校鉴定该生多才多艺,出类拔萃主要家庭成员情况简介父母:教师,工作认真,教学成绩优秀,受人尊敬
姐姐:医生,在一家医院工作,远近闻名要求:
1.层次要清楚,条理性要强,2.字数在100~140字.
答案
1.
MynameisLiHua.IwasborninDalian,LiaoningprovinceinFebruary1977.Istartedschoolin1984whenIwasseven.IstudiedinGuangmingPrimarySchoolfrom1984to1990.AfterthatIwenttoNo.62MiddleSchoolofDalianandgraduatedthissummer.ThemainsubjectsIstudiedatschoolincludedChinese,maths,English,physics,chemistryandputer.IlikeEnglishandputerbestandIamverygoodatthem.LastyearIwonfirstprizeintheschoolputerpetition.InmysparetimeIenjoylisteningtopopularmusicandcollectingstamps.Myfouritesportsareswimminginsummerandskatinginwinter.
2
I'mWangShan,agirlofsixteen,presentlyattendingBeijingYangguangMiddle.Ilikemusic,especiallyclassicalmusic.I'malsointerestedinphotographybecauseitallowetorecordthebeautifulmomentsinmylife.Thoughmyhobbies,I'vemademanyfriends.Infact,Ilikemeetingnewpeopleandenjoytalkingwiththem.Believingweallneedhelpfromeachother,Iappreciatefriends"help,andIamwilingtohelpanyoneinneed.Ilovelife,IloveMotherNature,andIlovepeace.Ihateanyformofviolence.IwouldliketojointhePeaceandFriendshipSummerCampsincetowouldbeagreatopportunitytomakefriendswithyoungpeoplefromdifferentcountriesandlearnabouttheircultures.
3
DearSir/Madam.
MynameisLiHua,IwouldliketoworkasolunteerfortheWinterAsianGames.
Iamaboy/girlof17andIamstudyingathighschoolnow.IamgoodatEnglishandIcantalkwithforeigntouristsinEnglishfreely.
IbelieveIcandoagoodjobfortheGames.First,IlikesportsandIknowtheplaceverywell.Second,Igetalongwithotherseasily,whichisespeciallyusefulforolunteer.Third,I'mreadytogivehelpwheneveritisneeded.MypromiseistoofferthebestservicepossibletothepeopleattheGames.
Pleaseconsidermyrequest,andI'mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.
Youraithfully,
LiHua
4
Ofallmyteachers,Mr.Mooreistheonewhoimpresseemost.,Thoughheis34,helooksveryyoungforhisage.Andhe'soneofthemostpopularteachersinourschool.
Comparedwithotherteachers,Mr.Moorepayoreattentiontohiswayofteaching.Hetriesvariouswaystomakehisclasseslivelyandinteresting.Inhisopinion,weshouldnotonlyknow"what",butalsounderstand"why".So,insteadofgivingusanswersimmediately,heencouragesustothinkbyourselveswheneverheputorwardquestions.Withhishelp,we'velearnedhowtoanalyzeandsettleproblem.Whatawonderfulworldof"why"heleadsusto!
Heissuchalearnedpersonthatwealladmirehemverymuch.
5
LiGang,aboystudentof21,isnowstudyingintheEnglishDepartmentofBeijing
ForeignLanguagesUniversity.Helikessportsandgames,singinganddancing,andcanspeakEnglishfluently.AsaLeaguesecretary,heishighlyspokenofbytheteachersandstudentsandregardedasanoutstandingstudentwithgreatability.
LiGangiromShandongProvince.Hisparentsarebothteachers.Theyaredearlylovedandrespectedbythestudentortheirwonderfulteachingwork.LiGang'seldersister,afamousdoctor,worksinabighospital.
LiGanghaadeuphiindtobeagoodtranslatoraftergraduationandserve
"thefourmodernizations"ofourcountry.
基础写作专题分类——如何写地方
I.阅读下列短文,然后按要求找句子:
1)NewZealandisanislandthatliesofftheeasterncoastofAustraliaanditiadeofSouthIslandandNorthIsland.ItissurroundedbythePacificOceantothenorthandeast,andtheTaanSeatothesouthandwest.Ithasapopulationof3.8millionpeople,about14percentofwhichareMaori.AucklandisnotonlythelargestcityinNewZealand,butalsothemostmulticulturalcityintheNewZealand.NewZealand,withitsnaturalbeauty,mountains,riversandnationalparksattractstouristromallovertheworld.
新西兰是位于澳大利亚东面的岛国,由南岛和北岛组成,它的北面和东面是太平洋,西面和南面是TaanSea,它有380万人口,其中14%是毛利人,奥克兰不仅是新西兰最大的城市,而且是个多文化的城市,它的风景优美,有山,水和公园.
2)BeijingisthecapitalofChinawithapopulationofmorethan14millionpeopleandit'salsoamoderncitywithalonghistoryanditsheritage.Beijingisthepolitical,economicandculturalcentreofChinawheremanyimportantinternationalmeetingsareheldeveryyear.Meanwhile,Beijingisalsoacityoftouriandmillionsofvisitorromallovertheworldetohereeveryyear.Becauseofthe2016BeijingOlympicGames'ing,hetakenplaceinthiscity.EveryChinesesincerelyhopeallthefriendromallovertheworldwillbeabletovisitBeijingsomeday.
3)HangzhouisabeautifulcityontheeastcoastofChinabytheQiantangRiver.ItissaidthatMarcoPolo,awell-knownItaliantreler,oncevisitedit.Hangzhouhasalonghistoryanditwasthecapitalofseveraldynasties.Therearealotoffamoustemplesandoldtowers.TheWestLake,withgreenhillsonthreesidesandmanybeautifulparksaround,attractsalargenumberofvisitorsathomeandabroad.
找句子:(Underline)
1.Location:
2.Population:
3.Somekeywords,phrasesandsentences:
1)Therebe
2)With
3)where
II.描写地方的常用句型
1.
2
3
4
5
6
II.语法填空
OneofthemostinterestingplacestovisitinSingaporeisthebirdpark.It's1)intheindustrialareaofSingapore,calledJurong.Thebirdparkisabouttwelvekilometers2)_thecentreofthecity,andit'seasyto3)______therebybusorbytaxi.
It'soneofthelargestbirdparksintheworld.Thebirdsare4)___inlargecages,andtherearehundredsofbeautifulbirdrommanydifferentpartsoftheworld,5)_______penguins,parrots,eagles,andostriches.There'salargelakeinthepark,6)_______arestaurantbesideit,andthere'salsoerylargecage7)______youcanwalkinsidetogetacloserlookatthebirds.
It8)_______abouttwohourstoseeallthebirds.Youcanwalkaroundthepark,or9)____onthebus.Thebesttimetovisittheparkisintheearlymorningorlateafternoon,10)______itiscooler.
写作训练1
使用5句规范的英语句子描述全部所给的信息内容.
〔写作内容〕
检测设你叫李华,你的一位美国笔友Mary要到中山来,她想你介绍一下中山的情况.现在请你给她发封电子邮件,邮件必须包括以下内容:
位置珠江三角洲南部人口约235万面积1800平方公里历史距今有800多年历史着名的景点石岐步行街,孙中山故居,民众水乡等.气候,天气气候湿润,多雨,全年平均气温约摄氏22度.说明:开头和结尾已经给出,不计入应写的5个句子中.
DearMary,
I'mgladtohearthatyouwilletoZhoushanforisit.
写作训练2(用5句话)
检测如你的美国朋友Bob下个月要到新丰来,你计划带他去游览云髻山,现在给他发一封e-mail介绍云髻山的情况,内容要点如下:
1)地理位置:位于丰城西北部,离县城大约8公里.
2)乘坐交通工具:打的或者坐公共汽车.
3)云髻山特色:新丰境内最高,奇石出名,多种美丽植物,水质清澈,瀑布迷人,可以观赏日出.
DearBob,
I'mgladthatyou'reingtoXinfengnextmonth.
possibleversion:
描写地方的常用句型
1.(aplace)+belocated/lie/be等
Theparkislocatedinthewesternsuburbsofthecity.
2.Therebe+名词等,with+名词等
Thereisalargelakeinthepark,witharestaurantbesideit.
3.(Aplace)isabout等from等
TheGreatWallisabout40kilometerromthatinstitute.
4.Chinaisagreatcountrywithlonghistory
5.用从句
1)TodaymanyChinesepeopleliveinVancouver,whichisoneofthemostimportantcitiesofCanada.
2)Beijingisthepolitical,economicandculturalcentreofChinawheremanyimportantinternationalmeetingsareheldeveryyear.
6.用分词
LocatedintherichPearlRiverDeltaandveryclosetoHongKongandMacau,GuangzhouisoftencalledtheSouthGateofChina.
7.Somekeywordsandphrases:
anareaof,cover(面积)
awarmclimate,theeragetemperatureinsummer(气候,天气)
答案基础写作1
DearMary,
I'mgladtohearthatyouwilletoZhongshanforisit.
LocatedinthesouthofthePearlRiverDelta,Zhongshanisabeautifulgardencity.
有关论文范文主题研究: | 关于写一篇的文章 | 大学生适用: | 研究生论文、硕士学位论文 |
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相关参考文献下载数量: | 20 | 写作解决问题: | 怎么撰写 |
毕业论文开题报告: | 论文提纲、论文小结 | 职称论文适用: | 技师论文、职称评副高 |
所属大学生专业类别: | 怎么撰写 | 论文题目推荐度: | 优质选题 |
Itcovers1800km2.Thehistoryofthecitygoesbackabout800Years.(Ithasahistoryof800years.)FamoussightsincludeShiqiShoppingStreet,DoctorSunYatsen'sFormerResidence,MinzhongWaterVillageandsoon.Zhongshanhasawarmclimatewithplentyofrainandtheeragetemperatureinayearisabout22℃.
I'mlookingforwardtoseeingyouheresoon.
Yours,
LiHua
基础写作2
DearBob,
I'mgladthatyou'reingtoXinfengnextmonth.OneofthemostinterestingplacestovisitinXinfengisMountYunji,whichlocatedtothecentreofFengTownandisabouteightkilometerromFengTown.Youcangettherebytaxiorbybus.
MountYunjiisthehighestmountaininXinfengandiamouorthecuriousstoneonthetop.Therearemanykindsofbeautifulplantswithwildfruits.Thewaterisclearandthewaterfallisattractive.YoucanseethesunriseintheearlyandI'msureyou'llheagoodtime.
I'mlookingforwardtoyouring.
Yours,
LiPing
定语从句的运用
请写一篇介绍中国的短文,内容包括:
1众所周知,中国有960万平方公里,是世界第三大国
2中国有56个民族,其中汉族人占94%
3中国有许多大河流,其中长江和黄河是最重要的河流
4曾有一段时间中国经济落后于世界许多国家
5随着经济的增长,中国人被歧视的日子一去不复返了,所有中国人都为此感到自豪
Asisknowntoall,Chinacoverorethan9.6millionsquarekilometers,whichisthethirdlargestcountryintheworld.TheChinesenationconsistsof56nationalities,amongwhichtheHanEthnicGroupisthelargest,makingup94%ofthewhole.Besides,therearemanybigriversinChina,themostimportantofwhicharetheYangtzeRiverandtheYellowRiver.TherewasatimewhenChineseeconomywaarbehindmanyothercountriesintheworld.However,withthedevelopmentoftheeconomy,thedaysaregoneforeverwhentheChinesepeoplewerelookeddownupon,ofwhichallChineseareproud.
基础写作专题分类——表述利与弊或好坏
常用句型
1.Ithasthefollowingadvantages.
2.Itdoesusalotofgood.
3.Itbenefitsusquitealot..
4.Itisbeneficialtous.
5.Itisofgreatbenefittous.
6.Ithaoredisadvantagesthanadvantages.
7.Itdoesuuchharm.
8.Itisharmfultous.
例子:
Booksarelikefriends.Theycanhelpusknowtheworldbetter,andtheycanopenourmindsandwidenourhorizons.Therefore,readingextensivelyisofgreatbenefittous.
However,everythingdividedintotwo.Televisioncanalsobeharmfultous.Itcandoharmtoourhealthandmakeuslazyifwespendtoomuchtimewatchingtelevision.
翻译短文:
1学生吸烟的危害比成年人更大,它不仅有害于身体,而且有害于心灵.
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2早起有益.早起可呼吸到新鲜空气,做早操,对身体健康有好处,早起对学习有好处,早起可从容制定工作计划,对工作有好处.晚起的人都应早起.
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3近年来,我们国家掀起一股出国学习的热潮,越来越多的中学生愿意到国外学习.到国外有利还是有弊呢请根据下面的信息,用英语写一篇题为在短文.
写作内容:
1).国外能提供良好的语言环境,更有利于语言的学习.
2).能培养独立生活的能力.
3).同时也存在不利的一面,例如:中学生年纪太小,缺乏生活经验,自理能力差,情感孤独.
4).学习生活费用高,给家长带来很大的压力.
5).中学生是否出国学习应根据自己及家庭在实际情况来决定.
TheAdvantagesandDisadvantagesofStudyingAbroad
现象Inrecentyears,studyingabroadhasbeenpopular.Moreandmorestudentsaretryingtheirbesttoapplytogoabroad观点Inmyopinion,ithasbothadvantagesanddisadvantages.
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总结SoIthinkweshouldconsiderourselvesandourfamilycarefullybeforewedecidetogoabroadforstudy.
1Asweknow,okingisveryharmfulfoourhealth.Forteenagers,itdoesgreaterharmnotonlytoourhealth,butalsotoourminds.
2Earlyrisingbenefitsusinmanyways.First,ithelpstokeepuit,andweallneedfreshair,butairisneversofreshasearlyinthemorning.Besides,bytakingmorningexerciseswecanimproveourhealth.Second,itcanhelpusinourstudies,andinthemorningwelearnmorequickly.Third,itcanenableustoplanourworkfortheday,forwecannotworkwellwithoutaproperplan,andearlyrisingcanalsogiveusenoughtimetogetreadyforourwork.Sowestaythatthosewhoalwaysgetuplateshouldmakegreatefforttogetupearly.
3Studyingabroadcannotonlyprovidethemagoodlanguageenvironment,whichisbeneficialfortheirlanguagestudy,butalsoenablethemtotakecareofthemselves.Ontheotherhand,ithasdisadvantages.Forexample,becauseofthelackoflivingexperience,theymayfinditdifficulttotakecareofthemselves,andfeellonelyandhomesick.Inaddition,highexpensesandtuitionfeeswillbeeaheyburdenupontheirparents.SoIthinkweshouldconsiderourselvesandourfamilycarefullybeforewedecidetogoabroadforstudy.
4现象:当今网络使我们的世界变得越来越少
观点:它在我们的日常的生活中起着越来越重要的作用,同时带来了很多优点和缺点.
数百万的人们上网查找信息,学习新知识,做生意,交朋友和聊天.网络在很多方面给与我们帮助.然而,它也带来很多问题.例如,一些学生上网到,没时间学习.另外,网上有太多的有害的信息.
结论:毕竟,每样事情都有两面,对于网络,父母应限制上网的时间,教师应告诉学生如何有效利用网络资源.
TheAdvantagesandDisadvantagesoftheInter
Nowadays,theworldisgettingallerandallerbecauseoftheInter.Itplaysamoreandmoreimportantrole/partinourdailylivesandbrings/hasalotofadvantagesanddisadvantages.
Millionsofpeoplesearchforinformation,learnknowledge,dobusiness,makefriendsandchatonline.TheInterdoeshelpalotinmanyaspects.However,therearemanyproblemsaswell.Forexample,somestudentskeepsurfingontheIntertillmidnight,leinglittletimeforstudy.Besides,thereiuchharmfulinformationonit.
Afterall,everycoinhastwosides.AortheInter,parentsoughttolimittheonlinetimeofchildren,teachershouldtellstudentshowtomakeuseoftheInterresourcescorrectly.
5现象:很多父母请老师或大学生作为小孩的家庭老师.
观点:请家教有利有弊.
利:效果更好.加强弱科的学习.
弊:占学生太多时间,学生容易养成依赖的习惯.
结论:如果你在某一科方面太差,请家教是可以的,但不要太依赖22TheAdvantagesandDisadvantagesofGettingPrivateTutorsispopular
Nowadays/Inrecentyears/Nowmanyparentsaskteachersorcollegestudentstoactasprivatetutorstotheirkids.Likeeverythingelse,gettingprivatetutorsalsohasitsadvantagesanddisadvantages.
Firstly/Ononehand,it'oreeffectivetostudywithateacher.Secondly/Ontheotherhand,itcanstrengthentheweakpointsofthelessons.However,gettingprivatetutorsalsohasitsdisadvantages.Foronething,ittakesupsomuchtimethatthestudentsnearlyhenotimeforthemselves.Foranother,studentscaneasilyformthehabitofdependence.
Inmyopinion,ifyouarereallyveryweakinacertainsubject,it'sOKforyoutogetaprivatetutor.Butmakesurethatyouwon'tcountonhimorher.
6网络在日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用,网上购物变得很受欢迎.
优点:方便,很容易找到你所要的东西或便宜的货品.缺点:看不到产品,无法检查质量或试用.网上购物有许多陷阱.你不小心会损失很多钱.网上付款不安全.
网上购物在将来一定很繁荣,但我们必须以平常心对待.
讨论广告
检测设你班在举行英文辩论会,讨论广告问题.请根据以下提示,写一篇发言稿.
现状广告非常普遍,在现在生活中起重要作用优点能告诉人们很多新产品的信息:质量,,购写地点,能吸引潜在消费者的兴趣,提高销量缺点广告不真实建议写产品前要看产品,不能只看广告
TheAdvantagesandDisadvantagesofShoppingOnline
AstheInterplayaamoreandmoreimportantroleinourdailylives,shoppingonlinebeespopular.
Thegreatestadvantageofshoppingonlineisitsconvenience.What'ore,itiseasiertofindwhatyouwantanditischeapertobuygoodsonline.
However,peopleshouldnotneglectitsdisadvantages.First,youcannotactuallyseetheproducts,checktheirqualityortrythemonpersonally.Second,therearealwaystrapsonline.Ifyouarecareless,youmaylosealotofmoney.Inaddition,theonlinepaymentsystemisnotassafeaspeopleexpectyet.
Shoppingonlineisboundtoflourishinthefuture,butwemusttreatitcalmly.
广告在现代社会中非常普遍,他们在我们的生活中起着重要作用.广告可以告诉人们现代有关新产品的信息,吸引顾客,有助于提高销售产量.
我们不要太过依赖广告因为有时候产品并不像它所宣传那样,在决定写之前最好检查产品.
Advertisementsareverymoninmodernsociety,andtheyarenowplayinganimportantroleinourlife.
Advertisementscantellpeoplealotofinformationaboutnewproducts:quality,prices,wheretogetandsoon.What'ore,theycanalsoattractpotentialcustomers'interestandhelpincreasethesellingquantity.
However,weshouldn'ttrustadvertisementstoomuchbecausesometimestheproductsarenotreallylikewhattheadvertisersclaintobe.Itisbesttochecktheproductsbeforewedecidetobuythem.
电视自从发明以来大大地改变了人们的生活.
优点:扩大人们的视野,了解科技文化知识,丰富人们的娱乐生活.
缺点:电视上有暴力节目,过多看电视会影响人们的工作和学习.
电视的好与坏因人而定.
OnTelevision
Televisionhaschangedpeople'slivesgreatlysinceitwasinvented.Likeotherthings,ithasbothadvantagesanddisadvantages.
Inthefirstplace,TVhelpspeoplebroadentheirviews,getinformationandknowtheoutsideworldwithoutleinghome.Second,peoplecanlearntheknowledgeofscience,technologyandcultureandsoonbywatchingeducationalprograms.Moreover,TVprogramakepeople'sliveoreenjoyable.
However,therearetoomanyprogramsaboutsexandviolenceonTVandwatchingTVusuallytakestoomuchtime.Itisnogoodforpeople'sworkandstudy.
PeopleallovertheworldwatchTV.Whetheritisagoodthingorabadthingdependsonhowpeopleuseit.
注意:谋篇方面:结构要清晰流畅,巧用过渡词
下列各组表示列举的短语非常实用,对高考写作很有帮助:
1.firstly,等secondly,等thirdly,等finally,等
2.tobeginwith,等then,等furthermore,等finally..
3.tostartwith,等next,等inaddition,等finally,等
4.firstandforemost等,besides等,lastbutnotleast等
5.mostimportantofall等,moreover等,finally等
如果只有两层意思,可选用下列两组中的任一组.
1.Ontheonehand,等ontheotherhand等
2.Foronething,等andforanotherthing等
however,besides
常用的过渡表达法:
1.表增加:and,also,inaddition,furthermore,moreover
2.表时间顺序:now,then,before,after,soon,gradually
3.表空间顺序:near,beyond,above,around,outside
4.表示比较:inthesameway,justlike,justas
5.表示对照:but,still,yet,however,onthecontrary
6.表原因和结果:because,since,so,asaresult,therefore
7.表目的:forthisreason,forthispurpose,sothat
8.表强调:indeed,surely,withoutanydoubt,truly
9.表解释说明:for,forexample,infact,actually
10.表总结:inconclusion,inbrief,inaword
基础写作专题分类——讨论型
范文:最近我们学校的学生就周末是否应该补课进行了讨论,结果如下.请根据结果写一篇短文.
赞成反对其它意见30%30%40%理由:今年的高考提前一个月.理由:周末休息充分能提高其它时间的学习效率.休息和学习同样重要,周末两天时间一天休息,一天学习.
Recently,thestudentsofourschoolhehadadiscussionaboutwhetherweshouldheclassesonweekends.Differentstudentshedifferentopinions/views/ideas.
Some/30%ofthestudentsthinktheyshouldheclassesonweekendsbecausethecollegeentranceexaminationthisyearwillbeheldamonthearlierthanusual等.
Another30%ofthemareagainsttheideaofhingclassesonweekends.Theybelievethestudentsshouldheagoodrestonweekendssothattheycanstudymoreeffectivelyduringtheweekdays.
Theother40%don'tagreetoeitheroftheideasabove.Intheiropinion,studyandrestarebothimportantforstudents.Theysuggestonedayoftheweekendshouldbeusedtostudyandduringtheotherdaytheyshouldheagoodrest.
fightfor/against
befor/against
agreetodo/disagreetodo
Someofus/thestudentsdisagreetoit.
写作训练:
1最近我们班上的同学就网上交友是好事还是坏事进行了讨论,有的人赞成网上交友.他们认为这有助于交世界各地的朋友.同样通过网上聊天他们可以自由表达自己的情感和观点.而且这可以有助于外语学习.
其他人认为不应该这样做.网上聊天浪费时间和精力.年轻人容易受骗,甚至成年人也不能分辨坏人.
个人观点:只要人们懂得如何保护自己不受伤害就可以交网友.
MyViewonMakingOnlineFriends
IakingonlinefriendsagoodthingorabadthingDifferentpeopleholddifferentopinions.
Somepeopleareinforofmakingonlinefriends.Theythinkithelpakemorefriendromallovertheworld.Alsotheycanexpresstheirfeelingsandopinionorefreelybychattingonline.Moreover,theycangethelpwiththeirforeignlanguagestudies.
Others,however,thinkpeopleshouldnotdothis.Theybelievemakingonlinefriendsisawasteroftimeandenergy.Besides,youngpeopleeasilygetcheatedonline,sinceeventheadultscannotdistinguishthebadguys.
Inmyopinion,peoplecouldmakeonlinefriendssolongastheyknowhowtoprotectthemselverombeinghurt.
2现在越来越多的学生愿意做,他们做商店的售货员,打字员,怎么写作员,销售员等,因此我们进行了学生应不应该做的讨论.
我赞成做,因为它给学生带来很多优点.做他们可以挣钱,因此他们可以减轻父母的负担.而且,做可以帮助他们获得社会经历,发展个人能力和让生活更丰富.此外,还可以更了解社会.
总的来说,只要他们可以平衡学习和工作两方面就应该做.
ShouldStudentsTakePart-timeJobs
Nowadays,moreandmorestudentsarewillingtodopart-timejobs.Theyworkasshopassistants,typists,waiters,saleenetc.Thustherearemanydiscussionsaboutwhetherstudentsshouldtakepart-timejobs.
Iaminforoftakingpart-timejob,becauseitbringanyadvantagestostudents.Bydoingpart-timejobs,theycanearnmoneyontheirownsothattheycanreducetheirparents'burden.Besides,takingpart-timejobscanhelpthemgetsocialexperience,developpersonalabilitiesandmaketheirliveorecolorful.What'ore,itcanletstudentsknowthesocietybythemselves.
Inaword,studentsshouldtakepart-timejobsaslongastheycankeepabalancebetweenstudyandwork.
3最近越来越多的人喜欢养宠物.我们班上的同学对于养宠物到底好不好进行了讨论,不同的人有不同的观点.
宠物爱好者认为宠物可以给人们提供欢乐和陪伴.他们不仅是好朋友而且是家庭成员,所以他们不会感到寂寞.
其他人认为养宠物浪费时间和精力.有些宠物可能引起严重的疾病.另外有些养宠物的人忽略了其他人的健康和公众环境.
个人观点:只要方法得到,合法,可以养宠物.
ArePetsGoodforPeople
Inrecentyears,moreandmorepeopleliketoheapet.Opinionsaboutwhetherpetsaregoodforpeoplevaryfrompersontoperson.
Pet-loverindpetscanprovidepleasureandpanionship.Theythinkpetsarenotonlygoodfriendsbutalsomembersofthefamily,sotheydon'tfeellonelyanymore.
Othersthinkthatkeepingpetsisjustawasteoftimeandenergy.Andsomepetscancauseseriousdiseases.Besides,somepetownersneglectothers'healthandthepublicenvironment.
Personallyspeaking,Iagreetothefirstarg